Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. As in, how ill knock your head over heels! Youve made your point! The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud were in the spa, trying to get their minds off the trouble their kids caused yesterday. ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention - The Loud House Encyclopedia Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! There's no need to shout. Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. Rita: Honey, please. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. Lana: (tearful) He might tell everyone in town and everyone will hate us. I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. All of you!" Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. helluvaboss. And I HATE LEECHES!" Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." The family sees this and gasps in shock.). Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! ", (and that did it. No Such Luck | The Loud House Encyclopedia | Fandom He flies over to her and onto her hand.) Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. "Good riddance." Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! ", Lincoln: "No. "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. Don't fight now! Are you saying that our parents are responsible getting us kicked out?" You're scaring even me. My first story is done. (Tears up) Our only bro. (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. divine001 on Tumblr YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I do not own the Loud . "Which room number is it?" The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! ", Luna: "No, you were right. Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. Lucy: Gasp! "Yeah, brah." turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! My team needs that! They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? Now, let me make this clear! by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Lincoln: No! Post-Story Notice: Anyway. (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! You can never come back. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. SEE YOU NEVER!" "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." You just mess up everything! And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. I hate that you never listen to reason! Get me arrested. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. Lola: Me too! It really doesn't. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. Luna: Bro, why you so upset? I hate clowning! Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! I hate softball! Lucy: Lincoln, stop! I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. That's not how it works in the hotel. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. The Loud House: Suite and Sour (Alternate Ending) - DeviantArt The Loud House Fanfiction: No Such Luck PM1's Version Luck. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. MY TROPHIES!!! We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. I don't need anyone! ", Lincoln: "Thanks. Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! No Such Luck part 2 | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt Maybe I should just quit the team. Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. He managed to, but with a twist. I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." No Such Luck, No Such Love (Fanfic) - TV Tropes What's going on here?! "Huh. But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! No more Loud Family? Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. (Family begins to come around. The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). The voice asked. Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! "Same here." Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. He really doesn't like us at all does he? (Lynn looks confused.) "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". How can I help you?" I am bad luck! You never let me have a say in the matter! I'll never be able to play games the best way again! ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. Theres nothing lucky about it! Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. This is a family moment. "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). And he did not look happy. Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? Rita: Okay Lincoln! Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? [The softball playoffs. You are about as braindead as you're heartless! Hope you enjoy. Honey, we're back. Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! Luna: [Blushes] Really? Now we've broken the shower." THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" I need to hide! He's just really mad, isn't he? Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! Lincoln After Dark | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. ", Lori: "Oh Lincoln, if you don't feel like attending our events all the time, we're not forcing you to go. When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. I'm not bad luck. While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. Lincoln: That's what i always say. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Everyone awed over this.] We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Which she did. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. Spell it out alt ending7. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." Lincoln asked his parents. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." Keep on writing fics like this! Luna: That was rockin'. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. Also please don't flame me. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! Lori finished with. Luna: I dont know. What seems to be the problem?" Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). Didn't you say you would never kick us out? And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. "Sigh. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. ENOUGH!!! [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. Then, he opened it up. We need it! Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! ", (the sisters cheers. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. I feel like a fool! Things were destroyed or damaged and they saw some people getting tended to for bruises. I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." But dont worry, youre still a great writer. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. N Eddy's big picture show . Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. Journal. The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). The Loud House Revamp: No Such Luck (Full Episode)